No need to apologize. The fights stopping is very real but i though jade would've handled it a little differently... (i had something smart to say after that but i forgot) I didnt know that their houses were real and stuff...

yup. did u c them?

The chapter felt cliche to me, with the whole rafting into the middle of nowhere to talk about feelings, to the breakup because of fighting.
The style was good, but it just felt cliche to me.

Yep pretty kewl!! And trev coming to think about it, the rowing part of it was a bit old... I dont think i said this but it was rather funny. Funny in a way that it mkes you smile n not laugh...

Kell, I wanted to tell this a couple of times before but kept on forgetting. There quite a few errors in your last few chapters of (i think) all three of your stories...

such as...

i meant that there were spelling mistakes and stuff like that not in the story...

chapter 27 is up

after a long long time i felt like i was reading another NAJ chapter with a little more than just words in it. i really am glad that theres just more than noah and jaden in this story. about the whole dating thing... he is totally worked up about it. i mean i know that he has to think about himself but, i dont see why he shouldnt do that when he helps other people too.

so u think he shud think bout both?

yeah, and he doesnt have to forget about his studies and stuff just to help other people. i just think that he is feling rather insecure (in a weird way) about things since the break up...maybe his dad dating will help him make up his mind about jade also...

hmm. good point

maybe, just maybe he's having the transition from a child to a young adult... my dad told me once, you never know when you become an adult until you are like 2 dozen decisions into it. maybe he has to think about his decisions and rearrange his priorities...

about the story... i miss jade!!

That chapter was AWESOME Kell! Wow, here your character is getting more adult and having to face up to difficult decisions, and at the same time your writing just went to a whole new level. I totally felt like Noah was a real person, and these problems were actually happening. This isn't a disparagement on your former writing, especially in your other stories, but keep this up! Once you've gone this far forward you can't slip back. Great, dude, seriously great.

As for the chapter, I can see why Noah got upset. I mean, he might have given his permission, but he still wasn't expecting it to happen, and I think he might be angry at his dad as well. I mean, if his dad IS dating this woman, which would seem likely, then he should have told Noah. Even if they aren't, he should still have told him about his partner leaving if Noah was friendly with her.

i think that this was his dad's way of telling Noah that he is finally taking up on that offer that he had given so many years ago. i forgot to tell kell (that rhymes!!! LFOL!!!) but it was a really good chapter. gotta agree with alex, noah actually feels like a real person again.