Story Discussion

ems · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue Nov 11, 2008 5:27 pm

may be he meant to do that, have you guys considered that????

painservedcold · Posts: 295 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

oh, maybe...

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Nov 12, 2008 1:08 pm

i didnt think of that...

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Thu Nov 20, 2008 4:08 pm

new naj chapter up guys. so...?

painservedcold · Posts: 295 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

very sweet and adorable

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:12 pm

i was hopin 4 a lil bit more than that...

painservedcold · Posts: 295 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

well, you aren't the boss of me. I'm glad that Jade's parents weren't completely psychopathic about him and Noah, and it was pretty cool that they all had dinner together and seemed ok with it.

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:58 pm

i agree. at 1st, wen i maybe slightly hinted at them not being cool w/ it, i wanted 2 make it that way, where they disapproved. but in the end, i thot "ya know wat, the hell w/ it. they will be ok w/ it whether they wanna be or not."

wasnt trying 2 be bossy

painservedcold · Posts: 295 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

You sure bossed Jade's parents around...

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Fri Nov 21, 2008 8:32 pm

stick 2 the story trev, pleez

painservedcold · Posts: 295 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

Technically that was part of the story, as Jaden's parents are certainly characters.
Very interesting how they had a complete change of heart like that.

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Sat Nov 22, 2008 10:03 am

well i dont think they rly changed their mind, i think its just that now we definitely know wat their thinking

ems · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon Nov 24, 2008 8:27 pm

it was kinda nice have people agree to it, but now coming to think of it i guess it would've been more interesting if jade's parents were (not totally) against them. at least them having sex. it would've made it a lil more dramatic. but other than that i really liked it.

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Thu Nov 27, 2008 8:20 pm

new chapter hope u guys like it. its kinda a treat 4 u

ems · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Fri Nov 28, 2008 5:09 am

it was a treat alright!!! dont really mind if you keep on trearing us, lol. i see why that chapter came in so fast, lol. tell me kell honestly, how long did that take to write/ type???? but anyways it was great man.