L'fucking'OL!!!!

FINALLY! hope u guys like it cuz i feel semi-bad 4 not giving nething in like, over a month

lol. i supose yer entitled 2 yer opinion

Whatever Kell, you know I thought it was good.

thanks. so wad other peeps think?

It was good, definately continued on with the tone and mood from before.

dude, that was really good, and i agree with trev that the continuity of the story was pretty good, not exactly from where you stopped but an interesting start for a chapter. i liked the way that you are making taylor gay (i hope so). i think this is the first time that you are writing about religion being in the way of bring gay, something that i didnt expect at all

im not sure if its religion specifically, but that will hav a minor part in it. not all homophobic ppl r extremely religious. sum rnt religious at all, its just how they feel. so we'll hafta c

Touchy subject, religion. I have to say, I have a tendency to be a bit of a militant atheist (see my posts in the rant thread) but unthinking acceptance of unfounded dogma, which is a central element of most organised religion, is in my mind the single greatest threat to human life in all existence, so it makes me touchy. I'll try my best not to offend, and you guys are not my target, since you are all intelligent, questioning beings; but apologies in advance.

...oh, yeah, right, the STORY! Lol anyway, I love the story, totally new direction for you and it's great! However, re the naming thing, usually I agree with the majority, a pair of names intrigues me, but also I read other stories just as much that aren't made that way, so it isn't everything. Plus with this story, naming it like this kinda says that these two will end up together, which kills a bit of the suspense, which I think is a shame.

Oh, I agree with you Alex. But I must say that the idea of religion in the story was definitely a good one. I mean, it's something that happens in everyday life, so why wouldn't it happen in our stories too. Plus, it just opens up the idea of conversation for us to talk & add somethings to the stories. Cuz utilmately, maybe someone out there hasn't experienced a relationship yet, and could learn something to when & if that happens to him/her, they'll know how to take it from there.

But yes again to Alex's post, I too apologize in advance for anything I might say on here that may sound like I'm picking on one individual. I'm definitely not, and get freakin' paranoid when I think that I may have po'd someone.

just cuz the stories r named after 2 the ppl dusnt necessarily mean theyre w/ each other 4ever. ive planned out the endings 4 all my stories.

i didnt give away nething. im just making sure none of u kabes assume nething automatically. maybe they dont end up all happily ever after or maybe they do end up & hav nice families in the future