i know its the 1st chapter & all, but i hope u guys like it. so tell me wat u HONESTLY think.

honestly dude, i think you should change you template of naming your stories. so far that's all i've got. but the weirdest thing is that i on naj posted a question very similar to what's happening here, lol.

wen u say naming stories, u mean like, just the 2 names of the ppl?

I think he means that instead of the story name always being Person and Person, it should be more original and interesting.

This story seems darker and more blunt than your other stories.

well the reason i do person & person is bcuz on nifty, i think theres a large amount of ppl who r drawn 2 stories based on their name. do u guys ever read stories on nifty mostly cuz of the names of the characters? i think names can be a factor in y sum1 mite be drawn 2 a story if they find the names attractive. so thats wat i try t'do.

i wanna express the names of the ppl in the story in the name of it

so far....i like this story. Ive already told you about the werid thing that happened before. But in general. I really like the story. I hate the suspence tho. Always getting me. Not cool.

Keep it going. I like it.

Oh yeah forgot to tell you on aim...but when i first started reading this story on nifty, I hadnet realized it was on of your stories. But after the first maybe 3 lines i was hooked. I was so far into it that i was actuly gonna turn around and post it on here.

You know, I agree with the same comments of the previous posts. I didn't know that it was your story either. But after reaching the end, which was another cliff hanger, eek, I saw the request to join kbboys. And in regards to the story title, amazining I am one of those people that do pick & read stories cuz of the names of the characters. It is actually why you said. The names for some reason attract me to the story cuz I have this corky imagination thinking of some sexy guy with that cool type name. Idk, it's probably more complicated than that, but I just saying that's why when I see story titles pop up on nifty with names of the characters, I figure it's gonna be a sexy, more personal storyline. AWESOME JOB regardless. Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and I will admit I like the boldness of this character named Nick. Kinda allows me to imagine what life would be like with my relationships early on if I would have been just as agressive too. Thanks!

looks like im totally against everyone here, except maybe trev... anyways i am one of those people who SKIPS stories with titles like this (dont ask me how i came across naj... cant remeber )

and it also just occured to me: why would someone (even out) not keep his/ her stash secret???

yeah i thought that was kind of general idea or an applied idea, That the stash was secret.

i dont think many ppl, gay or not wud leave their mags out in the open. lol

haha i would...but thats me, i rather not have ppl snoop i rather just have it out and if they really wanna know then they can see.

but before i was refering to...tho that not mentioned. It was applied that the statsh of mags were hidden in a drawer or something