This is so funny! It's short... just two brief chapters so far. It's meant to be a comedy. There are some good lines. It's worth it.

Here is an extract from ch1 that I liked:

"Most of my stuff got confiscated, hair gel, Nintendo DS, and the woman at the registration counter just didn’t really know what to do when she pulled out the gay porn magazine I’d packed just for rebellions sake. Her face kinda twisted, looked like it was having internal malfunctions and then froze on a facial expression not dissimilar to someone who’s just seen a cow mate with a goldfish. She placed it in the nearby shredder and then washed her hands. Twice. And she’d been wearing rubber gloves at the time."

http://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=693

haha, seans awesome

I sense far too much homophobe in Dan which is = to no normal which is = to closeted. I bet its how this goes. Sean is totally funny, and admittedly how, I think, I think sometimes though less naughty of course.

Jumping smileys time:

yup.. Dan is definitely gay... he's probably a power bottom as well!

i think dan is either a super closet case, or a super homophobe. i mean who knows u guys? maybe he rly IS a homophobe?