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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Wed Nov 12, 2008 6:15 pm

or maybe u guys r just trying t'tell me u dont like him as a brother...or a brother at all.... Suspect

lol jk


well i do agree that it wud hav a huge effect on poor connor & change him maybe into an even better person after he wud overcome it. but at the same time, other than travis obviously, he wudnt rly hav ne1 t'talk 2 bout his feelings & wat hes thinkin & all. well just hafta c wat happens...
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:36 am

i think i can wait, lol
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:56 pm

we can all wait
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:38 pm

I like this one better than NAJ to be honest...has a completely different texture, a different feel to it.

I'll get around to writing my own story soon of course. Much too busy with school work though!

As far as Connor's brother, let's do this: make Travis not too into sex, let's say he wants to wait...then Connor has incest with his brother (lulz)...and then Connor's brother dies. And then it hurts him even more but he can't tell Travis about it, obviously. But I agree about holding the death off for a while. Get everyone really attached to him.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:58 pm

wat, dus his bro diie wen hes doing it w/ his brother?
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:16 pm

No...a while later.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:50 pm

ohh

thats an interesting request...
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Nov 13, 2008 10:56 pm

honourable?
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:37 am

interesting alright (i thought that his bro was str8), but lets take the incest part out and do it this way. make connors bro have sex w/ TRAVIS and continue the wayt staile wanted it, im sorry staile im not into incest that's why.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Sat Nov 15, 2008 11:42 am

I'm not into incest but I figured it provided a pretty interesting and (unfortunately?) realistic kind of twist in the plot. I like your idea. But it doesn't matter... Kell's going to do what he wants. :p
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Sat Nov 15, 2008 3:55 pm

Both ideas would be pretty hot, I hope Kell does what he thinks is right.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Sun Nov 16, 2008 1:38 am

icest stories r kinda hot...but chris & travis is pretty dramatic...AHH I LIKE BOTH.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:54 pm

ok, so chapter 4 is up now. tell me wat u think
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:40 pm

Your chapters are NOT long enough!

I'm trying to write longer so that way it doesn't feel so short.

Plus you stole my idea! Grr. Quantum of Solace..
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Wed Nov 19, 2008 9:14 pm

wada ya mean theyre not long enuf?
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Wed Nov 26, 2008 11:04 am

for me its alright. i just hate reading stories that are more than 3 pages long. and yeah you stole staile's idea of quantum of solace, bad boy!!! Mad Evil or Very Mad you should be Embarassed kell!!!! lol! lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Wed Nov 26, 2008 2:05 pm

i needed a movie. so pardon me.

hey he stole my idea of using this site 4 his story. lol
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:11 am

you opened this topic so that others can put in stories and he used it. cant blame him.....
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:25 pm

fine. blah blah blah. lol
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Sat Nov 29, 2008 1:19 pm

yeah, that's what i thought was coming, lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Sun Nov 30, 2008 8:19 pm

spilling the beans lol
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Mon Dec 01, 2008 6:48 pm

sry i havnt had up a new chapter in a while. theres bin sum important naj chapters i had 2 write, then a vacation & now lotsa hw again. hopefully though this week will show a new chapter
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:02 pm

k, new tac chapter up. i was originally planning 2 go in a different direction w/ this chapter, but then bcuz of sum other outside stuff, i decided 2 write it this way. not the best tac chapter so far i think but decent.

so...?
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:29 pm

was an interesting chapter, you're doing lots of set up chapters these days, interesting way of doing things.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Thu Dec 04, 2008 10:55 pm

thanks. i, i....i dont wanna say im having "trouble" getting the "real stuff" started, like them getting more intimate w/ each other, but i think i just wanna keep them going steady 4 now 4 a while until they take things 2 that level.
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