Story Discussion

Awwwww....
The last chapter was really nice. They're just so sweet to each other.
Ohhh and my bad about calling Connor, Collin, it both starts with a C anyway and it sounded the same to me.
Keep the chapters coming!!!

P.S.
I want more NAJ!

SHUT UP ABOUT NAJ. lol

and thats ok, u wouldnt believe how many times ive meant to say 1 characters name in their respective story & actually said the other. actually, ive done that a lot with my stories. the most memorable time being i accidentally submitted a rory chapter to nifty & within 1 paragraph, i said travis' name like 3 or 4 times when i meant to say trent lol

NAJ please.
lol.

Oh Connor, marry me if Noah doesn't want to marry me.
*I so need a boyfriend. O_O*

Hahahaha.

new chapter posted! fkjenrlkjalerjcnbaklelufh

ANOTHER clingy boyfriend? The way you put that fact that Jacob liked Connor. Nice one.

good one but i c jealousy

I dunno if it is jealousy actually. Maybe Travis feels like he has to connect with Jacob cos he's really good friends with Connor and is genuinely going the extra mile for it but when he does that he is unknowingly being intrusive too.

uhhh no one said anything about jacob liking CONNOR...

but as with everything, only i knooooooow xD

anyone else?

Exactly. No one SAID that they liked Connor in that chatper. Which was the nice thing about the whole thing.

one i c jealousy is jacob not travis jacob wonts connor for hemself

well i guess youll just have to wait lol

no i dont like 2 wait

well thats just too bad lol

All I can say is

ok

Even though it was a short chapter, it was like a build up chapter. One that can lead to many things in my opinion. There are so many things that can happen. Maybe Jacob and Connor drifted apart because Jacob started liking Connor in more than just a best friend way. Jacob maybe started having feelings for Connor and he didn't know how to deal with his feelings for him. Maybe Connor will have a self realization thing and he'll wanna know who Jacob first liked.
A lot of things can happen. And only Kell knows what's gonna happen next. :O

new chapter up. WHAT!

I don't wanna TALK about it =)

I don't think I've read so much about Travis with him showing up only for a couple of lines. Was this chapter inspired by that phone call that you were listening to? lol. Not bad kell, I sorta could feel Travis overpowering Connor. Like when I read the Bible and I can feel with hand of on me LOL. But god job nevertheless. Travis is an idiot for thinking that Connor needs to taken accounted for/ taken care of every second since the near drowning situation.

wait, what phone call r u talking about?

The one that you were listening to for half an hour where the bf and gf were fighting and they broke up.

oh! hahaha, nah the overwhelming majority of this chapter was written last night lol

It would've been cool if it was though lol.

yay, new chapter...and it didnt take that long...lol

Not long at all, lol.

Meh. I hope the separate before one person starts to hate the other.