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+26modernecstasy luvnrock theviper2288 Raine marcuss ... Shauni Evilpanda DreamCatcher Milo Dannyboi charlezmatthew nicks18 Mr. Mike Ecii rando88 b20vcrxsir orion91 Sabazius Staile Billy88 No Answer xxdarrynashleyxx painservedcold ems Kell 30 posters |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:41 am | |
| its funny cuz there r plenty of times where ill say travis instead of taylor & vice versa & ill read it over & be like OH SHIT! | |
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Sabazius
Posts : 676 Join date : 2008-11-13 Age : 32 Location : Sheffield
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Nov 10, 2010 12:14 pm | |
| It doesn't help that they've both got two syllables in their name. Nobody ever has this trouble with Noah and Nick... | |
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theviper2288
Posts : 1 Join date : 2010-11-10
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Nov 10, 2010 2:47 pm | |
| hi i just joined this site today i started reading NAT early this morning and just finished...i was just wondering is there gonna be more chapters? | |
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Sabazius
Posts : 676 Join date : 2008-11-13 Age : 32 Location : Sheffield
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Nov 10, 2010 3:15 pm | |
| Welcome theviper2288! We hope you stay around and become part of our ever-growing community of Kell's literary fanboys lol If you want, introduce yourself in... the introductions thread! Yeah, pretty self explanatory. And to answer your question, there will most definitely be more chapters of Nick and Taylor's story to come in the future Kell never leaves his story unfinished, like a good writer | |
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Posts : 344 Join date : 2010-08-10 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:18 pm | |
| yay! that was a great chapter. and i definatly think the sex slave offer should be taken up | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:16 pm | |
| - Sabazius wrote:
- It doesn't help that they've both got two syllables in their name. Nobody ever has this trouble with Noah and Nick...
really? cuz i mess up their names when i write | |
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luvnrock
Posts : 16 Join date : 2010-12-03 Age : 35 Location : minnesota
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Dec 13, 2010 11:04 pm | |
| ugh...can't wait til the next chapter. i really like this story... | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Tue Dec 14, 2010 8:26 pm | |
| dont worry, itll be up faster than you can say the longest sentence u can think of. | |
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Posts : 344 Join date : 2010-08-10 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Tue Dec 14, 2010 9:32 pm | |
| - dare de-vil wrote:
- dont worry, itll be up faster than you can say the longest sentence u can think of.
When every scribe of any ambition at all went about constructing one architectural wonder of a sentence after another, because what is the point of writing if you cannot achieve with it things that cannot be achieved by speech, and this attitude led to a proliferation of ornate sentences designed to contain entire arguments between the first word and the final period, which often waited so far down at the other end of things that once the reader got to it, everything from the beginning had become a hazy memory, a vague recollection of the original idea, and so the ordinary reader, rather than the reader with perfect recall, was forced, if she or he wanted to understand the entire sentence, to return to the beginning and start reading all over again, hoping this time to bring more of the ideas into focus, or even to discover if the grammar held any ideas at all, because (at least from a cynical point of view) it was just as likely that the sentence was a bloated collection of words that said little. | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:48 pm | |
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luvnrock
Posts : 16 Join date : 2010-12-03 Age : 35 Location : minnesota
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:14 pm | |
| wow. Thats a long sentence. | |
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Sabazius
Posts : 676 Join date : 2008-11-13 Age : 32 Location : Sheffield
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:04 am | |
| As regards long sentences, there are few sources more eloquent than that strange beast that we call the internet: the home of anonymous and trolls; a repository of vast expanses of information both accurate and inaccurate, useful and useless, detailed and cursory, beautiful and horrifying; the location of such marvels as MMORPGs, fora upon fora filled to the brim with everything from the fascinated obsessions of basement-dwelling nerd to banal chatter to hardcore illegal pornography - indeed, there are many things which could be said to characterise the internet, but to me it would seem that the most accurate way of succinctly summing it up would be to call it the home of the human in the 21st century (although technically the internet has been around for a while, as it was originally designed in its most primitive form as an infrastructure for the sharing of academically relevant information and work, even if it has only relatively recently become open to the masses) and from the internet I have found a resource which typifies some of the qualities of information on the internet that I have only recently expressed further down - but I am going in circles, and circularity is a singular crime, if you pardon the ever so subtle play on words, which is in fact the downfall of organised religion as I see it, inasmuch as most religions rely on a divine text to support their assertion of the existence of a deity, while that very text itself relies on the deity it asserts to exist to support its own claims of authority, but then again I do suppose that a certain level of circularity is inevitably characteristic of the stream-of-consciousness style of writing in which I am currently engaging, for I find it best to maintain a steady flow of ideas lest I get lost in the text as I write it, which would be a great and terrible pity - and the irony of ironies, as I was writing that very sentence I DID lose my train of thought, and found myself only moments later meandering through meaning as I sought desperately to reclaim my lost trail, even as I acknowledged the inevitability of that thought-path's demise, for death and decay are inevitable; and that is how we find ourselves here, listening to me talking about irony in the most self-reflexive of ways - and that's just typical of the postmodern prison in which my writings (and modern society in general) is/are trapped - but I digress once more, and it is with this digression and the explanation that follows in the meaning above these very words that I must confess that I am only writing this in the first place because I would otherwise be writing an essay which I am trying desperately to avoid because I hate it, penultimately mention that I should stop, and conclude at last by sharing the link to that resource on the subject of long sentences about which I have told you so much, dear reader http://gavroche.org/vhugo/sentence.shtml | |
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luvnrock
Posts : 16 Join date : 2010-12-03 Age : 35 Location : minnesota
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:54 am | |
| lmfao. I cant believe i read that. And i was also hoping by the time i finish reading that. A new chapter would be out already which i can see isnt. Darn. But alex you can really write long sentences. you should be a writer. I would totally read your stuff too. Im going to check out that link too. | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:39 am | |
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Posts : 344 Join date : 2010-08-10 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Dec 15, 2010 5:02 pm | |
| well why dont you give us one? | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Dec 15, 2010 11:12 pm | |
| u guys dont get it do u...ugh
the next chapter will come out eventually | |
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DreamCatcher
Posts : 408 Join date : 2010-01-02 Age : 30 Location : Wuconda IL
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Thu Dec 16, 2010 12:03 am | |
| i got it kell .. im smarter then your average homosexual | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:14 am | |
| after the longest wait ever, u guys finally have a new chapter to read | |
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Sabazius
Posts : 676 Join date : 2008-11-13 Age : 32 Location : Sheffield
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:02 am | |
| And boy, it's a good one! This chapter was brilliant, because the sex was not only well described and hot as fuck, but it was also intensely personal. You conveyed the thoughts and feelings of Nick throughout, without losing the mood, which made the whole scene far hotter I am immensely jealous of your fictional characters | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:06 pm | |
| i felt i definitely owed u guys at least a sex chapter for a 3 & a half month wait. i started writing it mid january but i just kept putting it off | |
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Posts : 344 Join date : 2010-08-10 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:02 pm | |
| that was hottttttttttt!!!! | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:02 pm | |
| Yes it was. That was extremely descriptive! but tbh, I was expecting more than a sex scene. So yeah, I'm kinda on fence. | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sun Feb 27, 2011 5:11 pm | |
| tbh i was gonna put more in originally but the fact that i spread out the writing over weeks severely messed all that up | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 28, 2011 3:57 pm | |
| It's cool. I'm happy that you are at least writing us something even through you college schedule which i assume to be pretty hectic. So thank you | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:30 pm | |
| actually i have more free time than i did before lol. but with more free time comes more of a life than writing gay shit xD | |
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