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ems

Posts: 1168 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Sri Lanka
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue May 12, 2009 3:41 am | |
| why didnt noah go??? anyways when it came to the part where TAC realise that it was a parade i was kinda hoping that they will meet NAJ  i guess the person who wanted your characters to meet is pretty lucky that he got his wish, lol. anyways since when were TAC going to leave high school??? coz as far as i remember they were just thinking about going to the same school and not the 'going' part of it... idk. anyways it was interesting but kinda pointless, the story didnt progress in anyway, other than that it was just funny in a weird way, that's all... _________________  You, me, whipped cream and handcuffs. Any questions? |
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dare de-vil Admin

Posts: 1146 Join date: 2008-10-06 Age: 18 Location: Massachusetts
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue May 12, 2009 10:38 am | |
| it progressed very very slightly. i think most closet cases dont rly attend random rallies also, so maybe hes getting a lil bit closer day by day 2 bieng more open bout it maybe? they didnt leave high skool, wada u talking about? _________________  |
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ems

Posts: 1168 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Sri Lanka
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed May 13, 2009 9:41 am | |
| I guess I just assumed that they finished school. The story progressed very little. Anyways, do you both of them will have a chance going to the same uni? _________________  You, me, whipped cream and handcuffs. Any questions? |
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dare de-vil Admin

Posts: 1146 Join date: 2008-10-06 Age: 18 Location: Massachusetts
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed May 13, 2009 11:57 am | |
| theyre sophmores in high skool. apparently travis likes 2 look at colleges early. lol its possible theyll go 2 the same skool, but realistically, its unlikely _________________  |
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irishboi69

Posts: 821 Join date: 2008-10-20 Age: 19 Location: Bowling Green, Ohio
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed May 13, 2009 2:21 pm | |
| Heck, there is nothing wrong with sophmores looking & visiting colleges early. I am hoping that my sophmore, almost junior friend would like to visit a college or university early soon too (hint, hint)  . But ya, I understand it & definitely enjoy it, lol. _________________ See ya / Bye ...
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dare de-vil Admin

Posts: 1146 Join date: 2008-10-06 Age: 18 Location: Massachusetts
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue Jun 02, 2009 5:28 pm | |
| aww shit, sry guys. i was rly writing & planning out a new chapter 2nite, but i got sidetracked by sum stuff & now its gone. i apologize. realistically, i probly wont egt up a new chapter at all this week. sry kabes _________________  |
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dare de-vil Admin

Posts: 1146 Join date: 2008-10-06 Age: 18 Location: Massachusetts
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:36 pm | |
| k, its finally up, chapter 12. discuss.....................................................................................................................here _________________  |
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ems

Posts: 1168 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Sri Lanka
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:53 pm | |
| Wow, connor was being mean... when i started reading i was like, kell why the hell didnt you put the sex scene? But later another scene came up, oh well. Anyways i really dont see why should travis should come out to his old friends. And like i said, connor was being totally mean, even though travis doesnt know about. I feel like theres something bad thats gonna happen in this trip... _________________  You, me, whipped cream and handcuffs. Any questions? |
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dare de-vil Admin

Posts: 1146 Join date: 2008-10-06 Age: 18 Location: Massachusetts
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue Jun 09, 2009 11:20 am | |
| connor WAS being a lil bit of an asshole. i mean, yer being offered 2 go 2 another part of the country almost free (being paid 4 by sum1 else) & yer complaining? i mean wtf? well, travis seems rly comfortable w/ his sexuality, so he probly wants 2 tie up loose eneds w/ ppl from b4 he moved _________________  |
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ems

Posts: 1168 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Sri Lanka
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue Jun 09, 2009 10:07 pm | |
| I didnt think about the travelling for free part but yeah, its pretty stupid of him... I was thinking about why he might be so reluctant. Maybe he has a serious superiority complex and pretty much hates farm kids except for travis... And overall the sex saved the chapter from being boring, lol. and what happened to chris?? Havent heard about him in quite some time... _________________  You, me, whipped cream and handcuffs. Any questions? |
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Sabazius

Posts: 228 Join date: 2008-11-13 Age: 18 Location: University of Sheffield
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Jun 10, 2009 12:15 am | |
| Travis's old friends are an unknown to connor, they might not like him or they might hate him for turning travis gay as they see it. Also, in travis's case he knows all these people, he's with his family, if something goes wrong he can deal with it. Connor would know nobody there but travis and his parents, and if things get rough for him he can't just make them take him home, he has to stick it out for the rest of their holiday. Personally I can see where he's coming from. Going on holiday with other people is a tricky business :-/ _________________ Sab's Rules For Living: Live beyond the confines your head. Give everything you can to everyone you know. No fear, no hesitation, no regrets.
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Sabazius

Posts: 228 Join date: 2008-11-13 Age: 18 Location: University of Sheffield
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Jun 10, 2009 12:15 am | |
| Travis's old friends are an unknown to connor, they might not like him or they might hate him for turning travis gay as they see it. Also, in travis's case he knows all these people, he's with his family, if something goes wrong he can deal with it. Connor would know nobody there but travis and his parents, and if things get rough for him he can't just make them take him home, he has to stick it out for the rest of their holiday. Personally I can see where he's coming from. Going on holiday with other people is a tricky business :-/ _________________ Sab's Rules For Living: Live beyond the confines your head. Give everything you can to everyone you know. No fear, no hesitation, no regrets.
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painservedcold
Posts: 294 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Jun 10, 2009 12:53 am | |
| | Sabazius wrote: | | Travis's old friends are an unknown to connor, they might not like him or they might hate him for turning travis gay as they see it. Also, in travis's case he knows all these people, he's with his family, if something goes wrong he can deal with it. Connor would know nobody there but travis and his parents, and if things get rough for him he can't just make them take him home, he has to stick it out for the rest of their holiday. Personally I can see where he's coming from. Going on holiday with other people is a tricky business :-/ |
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ems

Posts: 1168 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Sri Lanka
 | Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:57 am | |
| Hmm... It explains why he might be relutant to go but not why he was so mean about... _________________  You, me, whipped cream and handcuffs. Any questions? |
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dare de-vil Admin

Posts: 1146 Join date: 2008-10-06 Age: 18 Location: Massachusetts
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