Story Discussion

painservedcold · Posts: 294 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

agreed, lots of people live with and beat cancer Ephraim. I'm sure Connor's brother will have a very long, happy life...

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:59 am

i hope so. but i cant promise nething

painservedcold · Posts: 294 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

**giggles** that's no change from the norm.

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:31 pm

painservedcold · Posts: 294 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

lol, I guess you didn't get it

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue Nov 11, 2008 2:11 pm

no i did

painservedcold · Posts: 294 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

oh good ^^

ems · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Tue Nov 11, 2008 5:17 pm

you are the author, its totally up to you whether to keep him alive or to finish him off, but personally i'd prefer if you'd kill him off putting connor into a total emotional crisis and travis to help him out or something like that.

painservedcold · Posts: 294 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

well, I'm going to say that if you're going to kill him, don't do it for awhile...let the readers explore their relationship and get attached to him first, that way his death has a greater emotional impact.

ems · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:29 am

yeah, that'll make alot more sense. coz in the end these stories are all about relationships with different people and how they affect others.

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Nov 12, 2008 1:15 pm

or maybe u guys r just trying t'tell me u dont like him as a brother...or a brother at all.... Suspect

lol jk

well i do agree that it wud hav a huge effect on poor connor & change him maybe into an even better person after he wud overcome it. but at the same time, other than travis obviously, he wudnt rly hav ne1 t'talk 2 bout his feelings & wat hes thinkin & all. well just hafta c wat happens...

ems · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Thu Nov 13, 2008 3:36 am

i think i can wait, lol

painservedcold · Posts: 294 Join date: 2008-11-07 Age: 19 Location: Canada

we can all wait

Staile · Posts: 132 Join date: 2008-11-14 Age: 16 Location: Ohio

I like this one better than NAJ to be honest...has a completely different texture, a different feel to it.

I'll get around to writing my own story soon of course. Much too busy with school work though!

As far as Connor's brother, let's do this: make Travis not too into sex, let's say he wants to wait...then Connor has incest with his brother (lulz)...and then Connor's brother dies. And then it hurts him even more but he can't tell Travis about it, obviously. But I agree about holding the death off for a while. Get everyone really attached to him.

dare de-vil · Subject: Re: Story Discussion Thu Nov 13, 2008 3:58 pm

wat, dus his bro diie wen hes doing it w/ his brother?