i was 2 bored 2 put in a plot, so i sed "eh, theyll do it" lol. not even kidding

omfg!!!! that was soooo hawt!!!! spring was just an excuse for you to put in the sex right???

and i was reading it it and when i passed a line i was like, "ive read that somewhere else too" it was:the thin layer of cotton the only thing separating them.
i just cant place it. anyways it was a totally hot chapter

the mentioning of the 'thin layer of...' is used A LOT in nifty stories, not just mine

so spring WAS just an excuse for you huh??? (ANSWER ME!!!!)

no, but i wanted spring 2 be involved cuz Springtime by donald fagen was the song i was listening 2 while i was thinking of a chapter title.

ah, the donal fagen dude!!! lol.

haha

new chapter. its a lil shorter than i was hopin & expecting, but oh well. lets hear it kabes

Great chapter! We get some back story on Connor as well as a plot advance. He got completely floored by the gaymos, 'oh btw we know you're gay and so are we now sit with your boytoy!' lol. Nice as well the way he reestablished an old friendship - kinda shows that getting with Travis has changed his attitude as well as everything else. It's good to bridge the social groups.

i felt that it was some kinda tribute to lost friends or something like that, lol. i never realised that connor didnt/ drifted away from his friends over the previous chapters. kinda interesting how T&C are very careful or whatever with chris... they seem to care a lot about him. i really am looking forward to connor's coming out, lol. anyways for me the whole thing was kinda ok-is, not brill...

tribute to lost friends.....hmm


not brill, lol. i agree. i think the plot of it was decent anuf, but i think if it had bin a bit longer, i cuda gone deeper & made it better

Relax Kell, the chapter was really well written, it was nice to get some more background information on Connor and who he is as a person, not just the sex and stuff.

yes kell, when i said it was ok, i didnt mean that it was terrible, lol. the plot WAS pretty good. because the fact that he was making old friends new is something that we dont see very often do we now??? for me it just thefact that it wasnt deep enough like you said made it... ok-ish

new chapter. hope y'all like it

Hmmm, you keep talking about colleges and LGBT pride parades Kell, its become a theme for the last couple chapters.
Really nicely written as always