Vlista- Shane

http://vlista.gayauthors.org/Shane/index.html

wow

this was good...

23 chapters in one day....

will explain it better tomorrow... need sleep now. must wake in 2 hours....

was it one day... or was it two days? hmmm.... can't remember. They seem to run into each other when you're sleep depriving yourself.

Anyway!!

This story is good!

Warnings:
-Extreme child abuse. Not too vivid, but very brutal and not-unrealistic. The psychological development here is really intense and believable. My eyes became misty a hell of a lot while I was reading this! I'm convinced that the author has some experience with real abuse, somehow. The little details that are true of child abuse cases are present here and not say in.. Comicality's 'My Only Escape' which is good, but not quite as realistic as this story.
-PUNCTUATION! This guy has no regard for normal punctuation... but you'll get used to it and over it really quickly. It'll only bother the grammar whores, like me. The author does get a lot better as the story goes on. Looks like he was learning by doing...

I will say that this story has a happy ending. The author puts it right there in the intro explanation, so I don't feel bad letting that out. I needed to know that while I was reading it in order to deal with it. Also, a dog features in a very interesting way in this story and I think you'd like it Kell. You're a-boy-and-his-dog kind of guy.

there is a foursome as well... thought you should know that.

jd wrote:

My eyes became misty a hell of a lot while I was reading this!

-PUNCTUATION! This guy has no regard for normal punctuation... but you'll get used to it and over it really quickly. It'll only bother the grammar whores, like me. The author does get a lot better as the story goes on. Looks like he was learning by doing...

Also, a dog features in a very interesting way in this story and I think you'd like it Kell. You're a-boy-and-his-dog kind of guy.

misty eyes...r u outa the closet or wat..? lol

yeah i noticed his grammar. i give him an F- lol

yes, im a-boy-and-his-dog kinda boy completely. thanks jet that was very nice of u

I read behind a locked door usually... so my mom doesn't catch on when I look like I am really sad about something. Although... with this and some Dom stories, I have been known to read on my phone when I am at red lights WITH my mom in the passenger seat! I don't think she has caught on.
I read this at starbucks as well, yesterday. There was a cute guy there watching me curiously. It was around some of the middle chapters when....well... bad shit happens. I was red-eyed while he was watching me... eeek

Ya.. I think you'll like it kell.

shudnt u be paying attention 2 wats going on wen yer driving rather than reading slash fiction stories on yer cell phone? yes

i didn't exactly admit to driving WHILE reading... and I have no intention of admitting to that. I only submit that I was reading, and will in the future read while at red lights. Thats kosher.

i thot it was called stupid. lol

Vance Lister also has a few more stories that people would probably like. I finished 'Tyler' last night. It is good.. but not as good as 'Shane', so I won't do a separate thread for it. It is the same kind of teenage survival story though, with a lot of similar abuse. I have a strong feeling the author went through some abuse...

This story is a lot shorter... I started it at about 1am and finished it by 7am... short 18 chapters.

http://vlista.gayauthors.org/Tyler/index.html

thay r forbidden but i will keep eye out on them 2 c if thay come back

ok i reed them all but cameron so far but 2 the bast 1 is unbreakable faith i cry all the tho it but thay need what thay did 2 that boy done 2 them the 2 bast wood be one moment the 3 bast shane then tyler then cameron but that r all good ty 4 leting me no about them

as the story of cameron pep get what what thay got comeing 2 them carmha is a bicth if u dont b care4 u will get what u got comeing 2 u