Ramble's Story

http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/AlexHawk/ramble.txt


this has now made my top 5. & thats a bigger honor than a Kell Smile


P.S: alex hawk is by far, at least in my opinion, 1 of the BEST story writers on the internet (in this type of writing). i read almost every story by him on the kristen archives

http://www.asstr.org/~AlexHawk/

just re-read the story. remains 1 of the best ive EVER read. unfortunately, alex hawk's subsection site thing has bin closed, so that 2nd link i posted in the previous post is nothing.


u guys hafta read it

Hey Kell

neither link is working

yer right. try this 1

http://www.asstr.org/~Kristen/33/ramble.txt

i read half way through this and its pretty good. gonna finish it up now.

i love it.

it was ok. not as good as class by himself. what happened to it anyway?

well the author either abandoned it or he takes FOREVER 2 write it lol

A class by himself is prob the beast 1 I ever read, When I ran out of chapters I was like NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! and thats now 1½ year ago haha. I hope he goes back to write it though.

I know, I've been waiting ever since the last chapter came out and I'm probably gonna have to read the previous chapter just to remember what's going on lol

dare de-vil wrote:

http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/AlexHawk/ramble.txt


this has now made my top 5. & thats a bigger honor than a Kell Smile


P.S: alex hawk is by far, at least in my opinion, 1 of the BEST story writers on the internet (in this type of writing). i read almost every story by him on the kristen archives

http://www.asstr.org/~AlexHawk/

Aw, you say the nicest things.

I speak only the truth. Brotha, in slash world, you're a god

I speak only the truth. Brotha, in slash world, you're a god

dare de-vil wrote:

I speak only the truth. Brotha, in slash world, you're a god

Well, one tries.

So for the curious out there, you might like to know that I'm turning this story into a legit novel. I'm removing pretty much all the sex and keeping just the core story of "boy moves from Mississippi to Seattle and discovers his sexuality". All the characters except Ramble and Peabo have gone through a great many changes (Chad is Asian, Daniel is now a very out gay boy named Danny and Kelly is 14, no one's sister and... well, still sleeps around), and the plot is much deeper. Basically it's being turned into a gay teenage romance novel. Currently I'm about 1/3 of the way done with it. I'll keep you guys informed as I make progress, if you like.

Wow! That would be awesome if you could keep us informed about it, that'd be a really cool thing to have in schools and bookstores, god knows there needs to be more queer literature aimed at younger generations.

Alex Hawk wrote:

So for the curious out there, you might like to know that I'm turning this story into a legit novel. I'm removing pretty much all the sex and keeping just the core story of "boy moves from Mississippi to Seattle and discovers his sexuality". All the characters except Ramble and Peabo have gone through a great many changes (Chad is Asian, Daniel is now a very out gay boy named Danny and Kelly is 14, no one's sister and... well, still sleeps around), and the plot is much deeper. Basically it's being turned into a gay teenage romance novel. Currently I'm about 1/3 of the way done with it. I'll keep you guys informed as I make progress, if you like.

Very nice! I look forward to reading it. Im all for smut and the like but the cute romance ones are much more difficult to find.

I will for sure look forward to read it to

That sounds awesome man
I think a lot of the more complex and deep erotic stories on the internet really have the potential to become fully fledged works in their own right. I'm a massive fan of fanfiction, especially harry potter, and I've read a fair few fanfics that are just as well written as the book, if not better, and utilise this fascinating universe in ways that JK Rowling probably never imagined. Also, i love the way in which 'online' writers are so much more connected to their reader base - take Kell for example here, where his stories are under review as he writes them and our ideas might influence how he writes the characters. Constant peer review and feedback can help someone to develop very fast into the kind of writer they want to be.
/ramblings
yeah, keep us posted lol!

So, I read the story when it was still online. Since Alex Hawk disappeared, I've found many of his other stories on various sites, but never Ramble. It was his best one ever! Does anyone have it downloaded?

ur right! it disappeared! hmm. well, ill second that. if anybody can find it itd be much appreciated

and welcome dude!

thanx man!

thay ant working 4 me i cant get there what can i do get there ?

u didnt click on the link?

hmm. weird. well ya know, its probly cuz alex hawk took all his stories down like a year & a half ago or something. so unless u can find it somewhere else online, i doubt youll find it. oh well :/