Overall story discussion

i know its the 1st chapter & all, but i hope u guys like it. so tell me wat u HONESTLY think.

honestly dude, i think you should change you template of naming your stories. so far that's all i've got. but the weirdest thing is that i on naj posted a question very similar to what's happening here, lol.

wen u say naming stories, u mean like, just the 2 names of the ppl?

I think he means that instead of the story name always being Person and Person, it should be more original and interesting.

This story seems darker and more blunt than your other stories.

well the reason i do person & person is bcuz on nifty, i think theres a large amount of ppl who r drawn 2 stories based on their name. do u guys ever read stories on nifty mostly cuz of the names of the characters? i think names can be a factor in y sum1 mite be drawn 2 a story if they find the names attractive. so thats wat i try t'do.

i wanna express the names of the ppl in the story in the name of it

so far....i like this story. Ive already told you about the werid thing that happened before. But in general. I really like the story. I hate the suspence tho. Always getting me. Not cool.

Keep it going. I like it.

dare de-vil wrote:

well the reason i do person & person is bcuz on nifty, i think theres a large amount of ppl who r drawn 2 stories based on their name. do u guys ever read stories on nifty mostly cuz of the names of the characters? i think names can be a factor in y sum1 mite be drawn 2 a story if they find the names attractive. so thats wat i try t'do.

i wanna express the names of the ppl in the story in the name of it

I totally agree with you hear, like before when i was on nifty, the names drew me in. all the other new stories i skipped over.

Oh yeah forgot to tell you on aim...but when i first started reading this story on nifty, I hadnet realized it was on of your stories. But after the first maybe 3 lines i was hooked. I was so far into it that i was actuly gonna turn around and post it on here.

You know, I agree with the same comments of the previous posts. I didn't know that it was your story either. But after reaching the end, which was another cliff hanger, eek, I saw the request to join kbboys. And in regards to the story title, amazining I am one of those people that do pick & read stories cuz of the names of the characters. It is actually why you said. The names for some reason attract me to the story cuz I have this corky imagination thinking of some sexy guy with that cool type name. Idk, it's probably more complicated than that, but I just saying that's why when I see story titles pop up on nifty with names of the characters, I figure it's gonna be a sexy, more personal storyline. AWESOME JOB regardless. Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and I will admit I like the boldness of this character named Nick. Kinda allows me to imagine what life would be like with my relationships early on if I would have been just as agressive too. Thanks!

looks like im totally against everyone here, except maybe trev... anyways i am one of those people who SKIPS stories with titles like this (dont ask me how i came across naj... cant remeber )

and it also just occured to me: why would someone (even out) not keep his/ her stash secret???

ems wrote:

looks like im totally against everyone here, except maybe trev... anyways i am one of those people who SKIPS stories with titles like this (dont ask me how i came across naj... cant remeber )

and it also just occured to me: why would someone (even out) not keep his/ her stash secret???

well in regards of being againest everyone. I personally think that its good for someone to have different views than the others. Makes things more interesting. And most of all what makes us human!

ems wrote:

and it also just occured to me: why would someone (even out) not keep his/ her stash secret???

the stash WAS secret. it was in his bureau or sumthin. taylor went snooping i guess while nick was out of the room.

& thank u irishboi person. lol

yeah i thought that was kind of general idea or an applied idea, That the stash was secret.

i dont think many ppl, gay or not wud leave their mags out in the open. lol

haha i would...but thats me, i rather not have ppl snoop i rather just have it out and if they really wanna know then they can see.

but before i was refering to...tho that not mentioned. It was applied that the statsh of mags were hidden in a drawer or something

ok ok ok ok!!! gosh!!! stop bombarding me with it, lol. anyways i do not have ANY porno mags, all my stash is in cyber space.

so is mine. lol


i mean...if i had a stash itd be online...

hahaha....sorry ems. Im crazy. I like to understand everytihing, and speak out...sorry. Im bad. lol

I mean yeah i do have cyber stuff as well. but i mean im one of those ppl who doesnt lock things and leaves all my stuff out. If ppl really feel the need to see what i have or take something from me i rather them see it or just take it, then have my stuff broken into. I mean i would really like ppl to ask me cause im open and like to tell them what i have to say or whatever...but in anysense. Im different from most ppl :/

ya know that my name is ephraim right??? and you can use it too, lol.

i was in borders couple days ago and saw a freshmen magazine and i thought, god they still publish porn magazines???? and i saw that "ryan dyser" was on the cover: "wow, he actually models in magazines? i thought he just did gay porn on collegedudes247

my stash is on my hard drive mostly but i got some dvds hidden away.

lucky. how old is u?

dare de-vil wrote:

lucky. how old is u?

Sorry. I'm 20. thats why the 88 in my name

i wouldnt have thought that u or the corey and evan guy were still in high school. you can write porn (and write it good) but u cant buy porn. well i guess u can find it anywhere for free.

Billy

Oh and I like the "name and name" story titles but it's probably why i read Nick and Taylor cuz i have a hot friend named nick and i like the name Taylor (on boys not girls); probably why i didn't read noah and jaden yet: I like the name noah but not jaden.

oh and u gonna call me lucky cuz i got a fleshlight? or maybe u got one too. haha.

Wow, ok on the "stash" being out in the open. I mean, I have one too, stash of mags that is, but I would never leave them out in the open. Oh goodness, my parents would kill me. But then that might be cuz of my parents and their big "catholic" beliefs & whatnot. Plus, not like it would happen, but if one of their friends or aquaintences would happen to wonder into my bedroom & saw them laying out. Oh my, oh my, lmao! But yeah on the cyber-stuff. Me too here. Alot safer that way. And videos play better on screen than on paper, haha.

Oh, and by the way, not that it matters or anything, but the names Sam. Irishboi69 cuz I love the Notre Dame Irish Character & 69 cuz, well it's obvious. But I answer to anything really & been called alot worst. TTYL.

billy:

the "corey & evan" is a story. its written by tyler (Staile). totally fiction, kinda like mine. also, as much as i love u calling it good, wat i write isnt porn. 1st off, porn has pictures & is way more fun looking at than words. i write shals fiction, which u can look up online cuz its an actual genre of writing. i also cant buy porn cuz im 17 & underage, not 2 mention i dont think theres a place newhere near here that sells it. yes, i like the name taylor on boys also. & not liking jaden, i laughed pretty hard just cuz it was such a funny comment. lol. & yes i called u lucky cuz u gots sum stuff & yes im jealous


sam: necessarily being catholic dusnt rly hav nething 2 do w/ whether or not they like sumthin. me, my sister, i think my step siblings & stepmom, & my moms side of the family r all catholic but i think theyre ok w/ the whole me ebing gay. even though ive never confirmed it 2 them & its never spoken bout, simply cuz i just think its 2 awkward. my mom wudnt kill me 4 having a fun/dirty mag out bcuz she dusnt like it, but rather bcuz a) shed be upset that i bought it underage & b) that i left i didnt pick up after myslef, much like a 6 yr old. lol