Story Discussion

here, u can talk about the tac story. dont worry, this wont be the only topic in this forum. hopefully, u guys will make up sum new topics involving the story, such as a topic bout characters, settings, predictions, etc. 4 now i just wanna know wat u guys think

well chapter 2 is now posted.

chapter 3 is up. u guys wanna discuss?

i totally forgot what i wanted to say...... oh yeah, i really wanted to know why you skipped the party where travis kisses connor. (that's all i can recall)

there wasnt a lota significance 2 them. it was just a party.

I thought you could have shown that a little more too, maybe for next time.

y r u so interested in the party?

Cause parties are fun Kell. Anyway I understand why you didn't seeing as Travis and Connor weren't even really at the party since they where up in his room the whole time.

well the kids at the party were in his room. they were all just kinda hanging out i guess. but then they all left cept 4 connor. thats y i didnt talk bout the party, cuz nuthin important happend

well i thought that it was pretty important because travis and connor make out there and they decide to become a couple during that party, for me that's a pretty big thing considering the fact that this story might not exist if the didnt go to that party......

they didnt become a couple at the party. they just kissed there. & while i do agree that if the party had never happend they mite not be 2gether, the party itself & the details dont matter. all thats important is after every1 left & the 2 of them kissed

i guess so. tell me, since travis is out and all in school sdoes everyone like know that he's w/ connor now???

no. thats gonna be the main plot of this story. c if travis can keep from spilling the beans bout him being w/ connor

i hope we get to see more fo his brother becuase i think that his (eventaul) death will play an important role in their relationship....

u dont know if thatll ever happen. he mite just live w/ it 4 the rest of his life...

agreed, lots of people live with and beat cancer Ephraim. I'm sure Connor's brother will have a very long, happy life...

i hope so. but i cant promise nething

**giggles** that's no change from the norm.

k

lol, I guess you didn't get it

no i did

oh good ^^

you are the author, its totally up to you whether to keep him alive or to finish him off, but personally i'd prefer if you'd kill him off putting connor into a total emotional crisis and travis to help him out or something like that.

well, I'm going to say that if you're going to kill him, don't do it for awhile...let the readers explore their relationship and get attached to him first, that way his death has a greater emotional impact.

yeah, that'll make alot more sense. coz in the end these stories are all about relationships with different people and how they affect others.