Story Discussion

or maybe u guys r just trying t'tell me u dont like him as a brother...or a brother at all....

lol jk


well i do agree that it wud hav a huge effect on poor connor & change him maybe into an even better person after he wud overcome it. but at the same time, other than travis obviously, he wudnt rly hav ne1 t'talk 2 bout his feelings & wat hes thinkin & all. well just hafta c wat happens...

i think i can wait, lol

we can all wait

I like this one better than NAJ to be honest...has a completely different texture, a different feel to it.

I'll get around to writing my own story soon of course. Much too busy with school work though!

As far as Connor's brother, let's do this: make Travis not too into sex, let's say he wants to wait...then Connor has incest with his brother (lulz)...and then Connor's brother dies. And then it hurts him even more but he can't tell Travis about it, obviously. But I agree about holding the death off for a while. Get everyone really attached to him.

wat, dus his bro diie wen hes doing it w/ his brother?

No...a while later.

ohh

thats an interesting request...

honourable?

interesting alright (i thought that his bro was str8), but lets take the incest part out and do it this way. make connors bro have sex w/ TRAVIS and continue the wayt staile wanted it, im sorry staile im not into incest that's why.

I'm not into incest but I figured it provided a pretty interesting and (unfortunately?) realistic kind of twist in the plot. I like your idea. But it doesn't matter... Kell's going to do what he wants. :p

Both ideas would be pretty hot, I hope Kell does what he thinks is right.

icest stories r kinda hot...but chris & travis is pretty dramatic...AHH I LIKE BOTH.

ok, so chapter 4 is up now. tell me wat u think

Your chapters are NOT long enough!

I'm trying to write longer so that way it doesn't feel so short.

Plus you stole my idea! Grr. Quantum of Solace..

wada ya mean theyre not long enuf?

for me its alright. i just hate reading stories that are more than 3 pages long. and yeah you stole staile's idea of quantum of solace, bad boy!!! you should be kell!!!!

i needed a movie. so pardon me.

hey he stole my idea of using this site 4 his story. lol

you opened this topic so that others can put in stories and he used it. cant blame him.....

fine. blah blah blah. lol

yeah, that's what i thought was coming, lol.

spilling the beans lol

sry i havnt had up a new chapter in a while. theres bin sum important naj chapters i had 2 write, then a vacation & now lotsa hw again. hopefully though this week will show a new chapter

k, new tac chapter up. i was originally planning 2 go in a different direction w/ this chapter, but then bcuz of sum other outside stuff, i decided 2 write it this way. not the best tac chapter so far i think but decent.

so...?

was an interesting chapter, you're doing lots of set up chapters these days, interesting way of doing things.

thanks. i, i....i dont wanna say im having "trouble" getting the "real stuff" started, like them getting more intimate w/ each other, but i think i just wanna keep them going steady 4 now 4 a while until they take things 2 that level.