Overall story discussion

canadian mind tricks...

he has a point you know???

c trev? e agrees w/ me

im sorry to ruin the moment for you kell, but i was agreeing with trev

see, i got hooked to naj but this is a lot hotter. i like suspense, plot depth, build up, suspense, and all the other elements that make you actually think and want to keep reading instead of throwing the story across the room because of the redundancy...this is FANTABULOUS kell. (like that word, huh)

dare de-vil wrote:

wada u think im hiding?

A punk rock band made up entirely of penguins, playing a xylophone, a banjo and three maracas. Just cos that would be awesome.

wud u be upset if i sed that completely wrong?

wats up guys? oh i know, chapter 3. lol. read & talk

Gotta love internet history. I wonder how taylor will react when/if he finds out nick went snooping. Awesome chapter :-D

oh god that was awesome!!!! the part where nick says 'there might be a slight chance that you are bi' felt extremely sarcastic and a humungous slap on the face, lol. but it was pretty awesome

haha yeah. emphasis on all those words lol

so do you think that taylor had NAY str8 porn on his computer??? i mean if he's bi or wants to think that he's bi he should have at least some str8 pron on his computer at least to cover things up... right???

I think that's something he just said so he wouldn't be completely outed and embarrassed in front of Nick

So When is chapter 4 going to be posted?

b20vcrxsir wrote:

So When is chapter 4 going to be posted?

patience, young skywalker ;-) good fiction takes time, and our boy kell writer damn good fiction

thank u, master jedi...

yea, definitely can't wait til chapter 4, very good suspense build up at the end of each chapter.

saw that in the beginning of this thread, there was a lot of talk about story titles, and i noticed that on this site you titled each chapter of NAT. so maybe to satisfy everyone you can leave the main story nick-and-taylor and then you can name each chapter as you post it on nifty. i have seen some stories like that
so instead of nick-and-taylor-1 it would be Lets-Get-Started

just a thought

i thot bout that wen i 1st began writing, but i decided against it 4 several reasons:

1. 2 lazy
2. sum chapters that r titled on nifty sumtimes gives ppl just browsing along the impression that each title means a different story. not only do i myself think that, but i hav other friends who read nifty, & wenever they come across a story w/ different titles in it, they leave it alone bcuz they assume theyre a bunch of different stories
3. 2 late now lol


so yeah. oh, & welcome 2 kbb, new nat mod

gosh kell, you are lazy... very lazy!!!

i like t'think of it as conservation of energy

lol!!! LFOL!!!

So your indolent?

I guess it will take a while for more chapters then


*no rush though. I love them and wouldn't want a rushed one to come out which was half assed*

yea, well i have nothing against you naming your stories what they are, was just saying
but yea, im lazy too so i understand lol

us lazy ppl r awesome