Story Discussion

Technically that was part of the story, as Jaden's parents are certainly characters.
Very interesting how they had a complete change of heart like that.

well i dont think they rly changed their mind, i think its just that now we definitely know wat their thinking

it was kinda nice have people agree to it, but now coming to think of it i guess it would've been more interesting if jade's parents were (not totally) against them. at least them having sex. it would've made it a lil more dramatic. but other than that i really liked it.

new chapter hope u guys like it. its kinda a treat 4 u

it was a treat alright!!! dont really mind if you keep on trearing us, lol. i see why that chapter came in so fast, lol. tell me kell honestly, how long did that take to write/ type???? but anyways it was great man.

well this chapter i had 2 write differently from all the rest. bcuz ther were so many words that wud be blocked here on my moms comp (which where i almost always write stuff), i had 2 misspell many many words then say FIX!!!!! in ( ), it took a long time. wen i wrote it all i sent it 2 trev so he cud fix all the words & then send it 2 nifty & post it here on kbb & naj. but there was difficluty w/ getting on naj & kbb so i had 2 end up editing it all at my aunts house, which cud get me killled probly. lol

i thank trev 4 putting it on nifty

2 truly answer yer question, it took the course of 2 days cuz it was getting late the 1st day. usually though it takes a few hours 2 write a chapter

I do apologize for not making it work on the forums.

not yer fault. mine. i gave u the wrong password

quite alright.

im sorry if it seems ive kinda bin focusing more on naj lately. its only cuz the last 3 chapters were vital & i needed 2 squeeze them in sumwhere. but im gonna start getting bak 2 tac soon. so dont worry guys.

finally! a new chapter is up.

AGAIN, a new chapter is up. so wada ya think peeps?

omg chapter 18 was really cool and mark is such a creeper .
chapter 19 was good and noah he was so brave
so do all their friends know about them at the beginning of chapter 18 when do they find out?

i was thinking about that too... i mean if everyone almost knew at the beginning of the chapter maybe it wont be an issue among the once at the party.... and how the hell did he get drunk on CHAMPAGNE??? even im not that bad!!! (i dont drink much)

yeah please explain

well the drunk part is based off the 2008 new years party i went 2. my friends parents were serving us champagne but we were only limited to 3 cups (the cups were kinda small so not like, whole glasses). i had my 3 cups & i was kinda wild. but then again, we all were. none of us were actually drunk but i got accused of it (jokingly of course) cuz i was sorta acting it i guess. it was just the atmosphere of the party though, i was having fun.

hmm. im not rly sure if everybody alredy knew they were gay in chapter 18. i think it sed that the cinema they were at was in another town so they didnt rly know ppl there. wen yer around ppl u dont know, u dont rly hafta worry bout wat they think. but im pretty sure that w/ the concert thing, every1 knows now

at least you had fun new years day

yeah i guess so lol.

Ok, I know I'm a lil' late on posting something regarding the last chapter (#19), but I must say it was AWESOME! I really liked the ending where they had the chance to enjoy themselves in-front of the entire concert. Again, not much more to say except it was great. Def waiting for the next chapter to come out. Thanks.

better late than never ya know. honestly, i hav no clue wat the next chapter will be about. i mean, always write off the top of my head & all, but now...its weird. lol. ill think of sumthin though, so dont worry citizens of kbb

lol

hahaha

new chapter. so whos 1st?

i honestly think that that jade will eventually go into porn.... all im saying is that it starts with just one picture of a kiss... so do you think that it might possible???

i wonder if he was thinking of exactly that while it was happening....