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+26modernecstasy luvnrock theviper2288 Raine marcuss ... Shauni Evilpanda DreamCatcher Milo Dannyboi charlezmatthew nicks18 Mr. Mike Ecii rando88 b20vcrxsir orion91 Sabazius Staile Billy88 No Answer xxdarrynashleyxx painservedcold ems Kell 30 posters |
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Dannyboi
Posts : 343 Join date : 2009-09-14
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:47 am | |
| Gief new chapter! excited here | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Jan 13, 2010 4:12 pm | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Jan 13, 2010 4:53 pm | |
| am i the only person who has figured out which Mark kell is talking about here? | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:27 pm | |
| can u NOT give that away? thanks. | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
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Milo
Posts : 4 Join date : 2010-02-06 Location : California
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:41 pm | |
| Awww has this story been discontinued? | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:16 pm | |
| no it hasnt. lol. why do people think that? :S | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sun Feb 07, 2010 6:00 pm | |
| wen my stories end, ull know, trust me. if they get discontinued, ill say that lol | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Thu Feb 11, 2010 1:19 am | |
| to prove that its not discontinued, i posted a new chapter. talk amongst yerselves | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:42 am | |
| well we saw this coming. at least i did. but the sex as always was good lol. when has it been bad eh? | |
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Sabazius
Posts : 676 Join date : 2008-11-13 Age : 32 Location : Sheffield
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:06 pm | |
| YAYY! Finally, they got it together and had some funsies. Again, another fantastically written chapter, and that ending just turned it all round and gave it a whole new layer of significance... great. I'm sure there'll be trouble ahead between these two, but they're on the right track | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:36 am | |
| do you like plan out the sex scenes or do they just come out in a flow? | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:05 am | |
| they come out in a flow, so 2 speak lol.
a lot of the time, i go 2 other stories either on nifty or the kristen archives that ive read dozens of times over the years cuz they hav incredible sex scenes & they give me inspiration lol. but all the words i use r mine, i dont copyright. but it helps 2 hav sumthin 2 compare 2 ya know? | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 15, 2010 4:57 am | |
| - dare de-vil wrote:
- they give me inspiration
LFOL!! sex scenes give you inspiration!!! ROFL!! | |
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Dannyboi
Posts : 343 Join date : 2009-09-14
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:43 am | |
| I can't see the fun in that really E ;o, why shouldn't they give inspiration?, its just like you maybe get inspired when listening to a song of some old guy yea lets say bethoven or whatever ;o. | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:30 pm | |
| *sigh* i meant it in another way. | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:30 pm | |
| hahaha. wat i mean e is that certain phrases r used, or specific words placed before or after other words, etc. tiny things like that make it more interesting. i OCCASIONALLY take a couple sentences from other stories & use them in my own, but other than that, i write it all off the top of my head | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| cool. i used to think that writers when they wrote sex scenes it was somewhat their own fantasies taking form. it might be true idk. | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:44 pm | |
| well, take this 4 example: "My legs wrapped around his hips & my hands tightened on the couch. He slowly started thrusting back & forth, each time his dick almost slipping out, but then only followed by him pushing it back it. After about a minute, his pace had sped up." thats from a naj chapter a while back. i wanted sumthin 2 be imagined like that, & wen i came across another story that had sumthin like that, it helped. so those words r mine, but the idea of them came from a different story. they still come from my imagination though | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:42 pm | |
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Sabazius
Posts : 676 Join date : 2008-11-13 Age : 32 Location : Sheffield
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:20 am | |
| Wow, T's parents are lovely people. There's a great film called Were The World Mine, dunno if anyone's seen it, where this gay kid is playing Puck in the school play and magically turns half the people in town gay. It's kinda soppy, but this just reminded me of that, how people's attitudes are so rooted in ignorance, lack of understanding and fear. I'd like to think if Taylor came out to his parents they might come to get to know a bit more about homosexuality and stop looking at it as evil or some kind of disease, but sadly that seems unlikely. Very well written chapter. I also love the advice on dating, I can see how that would make sense. Despite my experiences with guys, I've never really done the dating thing, and it's something I've thought about more and more now that I'm completely out of the closet. Love the way this story is developing, keep it up! XD | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:23 pm | |
| 2 be honest that advice is my own personal stuff. im tired of hearing about ppl who freak out on their 1st date. i mean seriously, a date is for both ppl 2 hav an enjoyable time while eating, not 1 person stressing out trying 2 make themselves as picture perfect as possible. no, ive never bin on a date. but wen i go on 1, im not gonna be a) pretending 2 be sum1 im not, 2) stressing out just bcuz im on a "DATE" & lastly, im gonna remind myself that im just eating food, & there just happens 2 be a good lookin guy 3 feet in front of me | |
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ems
Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:33 am | |
| Yeah, great advice. I seriously think that it might work. Anyway I think dates are so over-rated. Anyway, once again quite funny. I kinga expected nick to bitch up to nick's parent lolm I liked the line about narnia, was so funny! Good work KB! | |
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Kell Admin
Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:38 pm | |
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Milo
Posts : 4 Join date : 2010-02-06 Location : California
| Subject: Re: Overall story discussion Sun Mar 28, 2010 7:23 pm | |
| I love this story thanks for updating | |
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