Story Discussion

Sabazius wrote:

So you did!
And I enjoyed reading it very much. I'm looking forward to the final retribution, let the bitch HUUUURRRRTTT! I got from this chapter that Noah might not be out of the woods just yet, psychologically speaking, and I can imagine his ability to be in a sexual situation will be affected, among other things. Anyone else get that? Maybe I'm just seeing things wot aren't there. Anyways, great chapter Kell

As usual, your psychological analysis seems spot on.

ok so i was thinking about the whole rape thing (for no particular reason). and what was Shannon thinking about? did she really think that she could rape someone, someone who knows her very well at that, and get away with it? i dont see the logic in it.

Well first off, its just a story so quit psychoanalyzing it. Second, do u everything about your friends? Better yet, do your friends know everything about YOU e? I think we all know the answer to that

dare de-vil wrote:

Well first off, its just a story so quit psychoanalyzing it. Second, do u everything about your friends? Better yet, do your friends know everything about YOU e? I think we all know the answer to that

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Careful, this IS E we're talking about here...

But in Answer to you E, the reality is that people sometimes do things that don't make sense. They see themselves as rational at the time, but any objective analysis would show that they're complete lunatics.

huh? whats that got to do with my friends knowing everything about me?

Because just because u know someone doesn't mean u would know what they're capable of

Because just because u know someone doesn't mean u would know what they're capable of

Kell you brought the story into a new level with that rapeing part i give you mad props!

Thanks Derek (spelling? Lol)

hahah its right. Why did you think up such a edgy move with NaJ ????

I wanted a life changing event with a bitch load of drama

Well you have achieved that goal

That's what u think lol

u thought the rape was the biggest drama. discuss

yes, i did. but this is pretty damn messed up! is abortion illegal in maine? with this case in the spot light i dont see that happening though. but awesome job kell. thank you for reminding that you have a sick mind lol .

im proud to say thank u


yeah, abortion is legal

what a twist!

I'll talk to you about the legalities of wher I think you're going with this.

OK first the beginning with the discussion about the dreams was pure ingenious and then you closed it with that fucking super ending .. Kell......you are GOD!!!

wow derek, im really likin' you tonight

i have my moments

so... im new here. im gay... in the closet... totaly obsessed with the stories... the usual. anyway, i like just read all of the naj stories in about 2 hrs at about 2 in the morning... soooo.... yeah

Hi Andy. Don't worry bout being in the closet for now and I'm glad u like my stories, thanks.

Welcome to my site

omg i cant believe he got raped and that bitch is pregnant! that was really dramatic...

^^^ we should be able to "like" a comment. that was something i would say!

well sadly, unlike facebook, my site doesnt update itself every 3 months lol