Story Discussion

psh, i dunno. lol


but thank u. ill keep up wat i can do lol

Kell's very good at creating situations and events that people can easily relate to, and that makes the characters incredibly believable. I think that's why his stories are so good.

painservedcold wrote:

Kell's very good at creating situations and events that people can easily relate to, and that makes the characters incredibly believable.

is that including the girl sex with the excessive use of a taser and stuff?

what do you think happened to most of the guys? i see danny on and off on MSN, alex only on FB and mike must be dead or something lol.

Blimey, I'm away for two damn days and all of a sudden I've vanished, only to appear on Facebook from time to time? Thanks guys ¬_¬
Anyway, welcome to our newcomers XD
Kell, what a chapter! Very affecting, and so realistic it almost hurt to read. I think it highlights a serious issue of female-on-male rape as well - the tragedy is that social perceptions of horny, pervy boys and innocent, cute girls lead to a lack of belief in or support for sufferers of this kind of sexual abuse. So yeah, great chapter, keep it up as always!

id hardly call this chapter REALISTIC lol. typically, u dont hear of many cases where the girl rapes the boy using cuffs, rope, a taser, scissors, a gag, a bandanna, the boy being gay & the parents dating each other lol

Sabazius wrote:

Blimey, I'm away for two damn days and all of a sudden I've vanished, only to appear on Facebook from time to time? Thanks guys ¬_¬
Anyway, welcome to our newcomers XD
Kell, what a chapter! Very affecting, and so realistic it almost hurt to read. I think it highlights a serious issue of female-on-male rape as well - the tragedy is that social perceptions of horny, pervy boys and innocent, cute girls lead to a lack of belief in or support for sufferers of this kind of sexual abuse. So yeah, great chapter, keep it up as always!

I have to agree with Alex on this one. This is actually a pretty serious issue that people don't always hear about because society doesn't believe such a thing. We're so inundated with images of girls being violently raped by boys that we forget rape is an action that can occur to anyone, and that you don't have to have a penis to inflict it upon others.

@Kell: The equipment used doesn't have to be realistic. It IS realistic because of the fact that things like that could and do happen.

ok

Well that was disturbing on so many levels in a good way sorry..... As I am one of those estrogen carrying machines this really made me go like WOW I guess we never really think about this thing going the opposite direction. All I can say is that while I can not and will not apologize for the whole XX race I will say that if I did this to one of my girlfriends, I would hope that they would kick me in the ****. What can I say other than there are just as many F***** up guys out there as there are girls.

Charlie

yer absolutely right. & while i didnt make this chapter 2 bring forth that issue, it definitely stands out.



welcome t'the site

I need more of this story! I really hope Jaden and Noah get back together. I miss Jaden

as much of a happy ending as i want it 2 be also, we'll hafta wait & c wat happens amigo

dukeguy06 wrote:

I need more of this story! I really hope Jaden and Noah get back together. I miss Jaden

Definitely. This is like my fave story of kell so far!

how much longer do we have to waaaiiit???

i dunno. maybe a week or so?

well boys we got a new chapter. btw, this is also the 1st time in a very long time that ive made a chapter a direct follow up to the events from the previous chapter (both these chapters happened in the same day)


im listenin

One of the things I normally like about your writing is that you do try to keep the characters and situations believable. This was a dark, terrible, horrible ordeal Noah went through, and his responses in the story are absolutely believable considering what happened to him. More importantly, how Noah and Jaden reacted was completely in line with how they normally act, which simply adds to how complete and good a picture you've created. Well done.

Yeah, as Trev said this chapter is completely believable, very dark and incredibly well-written. Your depiction of the effects of trauma seems spot on to me, and Jaden's reactions seemed in line with both someone confronted with that situation, and also with what we've seen of his character before. I can tell this will be an event which reverberates through the rest of this story, with some pretty intense consequences, and I'm looking forward to reading on! Haha, <3 it

i was actually expecting to read about Noah to be in hospital or something a few days later with a complicated law suit going on. glad that you did it this way though. idk whether it is realistic and stuff. never been raped before lol. but it sounds factually correct. so yeah, its cool. i was also expecting Jade not toturn up. i mean, Noah left a very breif message the way i remember. glad that he came. as always, i love Jade lol. anyways, great chapter once again kell. awesomely done!

Thanks

did YOU put up a new chapter? well I did.

So you did!
And I enjoyed reading it very much. I'm looking forward to the final retribution, let the bitch HUUUURRRRTTT! I got from this chapter that Noah might not be out of the woods just yet, psychologically speaking, and I can imagine his ability to be in a sexual situation will be affected, among other things. Anyone else get that? Maybe I'm just seeing things wot aren't there. Anyways, great chapter Kell

i think noah is kinda messed up. i mean, im guessing that it is perfectly normal to hate someone who raped you but to feel nothing other than that? idk. its not something that you just shrug off and continue hating only. and i thought that jade is also feeling something like that.