Story Discussion

yeah, e, u were wrong. nice

oops, sorry tyler, i kinda got mixed up. not with you and alex but who said that line... sorry.

Wow, I too find it funny that Ephraim got something wrong. Between Ephraim & Kell, I'd never have the guts to argue on what they said. Even if either one of them were saying that the sky was green right now, haha. I would agree. It's just nice to know you guys are normal like the rest of the ppl on planet earth, lol.

i dont like ppl arguing w/ me, but if its 4 a good reason, then wat the hell go 4 it...

i LOVE to argue with people!!! especially when i know that there is no point in it. i just love to twist what other people say to my favour and make them disagree with themselves. its so much fun, lol.

thats exatly wat i hate

you remind me of house, kell.

well him & me share very similar ideas bout sum very similar topics...

new chap. is it me or is the chapter a lil bit shorter than usual?

it was shorter, but it was still a good chapter, I kinda liked that it was less steamy

ssssssssssss....lol

ne1 else?

It was interesting that you spent alot of time explaining the job situation and how Noah got his job, was this based on anything in particular Mister Author Person?

dare de-vil wrote:

ne1 else?

cant u read?

dare de-vil wrote:

dare de-vil wrote:

ne1 else?

cant u read?

Well, SOMEONE had to take pity on you and comment on your work, since your audience completely ran out on ya.

good point.

THANKS A LOT U BASTARDS! lol

I liked it. But I think Tom should've walked in on Noah and Jaden doing...things...in the backroom.

Maybe something hot could happen in the walk-in freezer. That'd be ironic, yes?

i ALMOST put that in actually. but then i decided 2 MAYBE save that 4 another chapter...& make it be liike, AWKWARDLY sexy lol

That would be pretty interesting and exciting.

well, some of us here were sleeping and would never wake up 8am on a day where school was of no concern.

anyways, about the chapter, when i read about the job i was thinking to myself, i should get a job too, after i leave school at least. i should agree with trev that you did take a lot of time explaining about the job, why??? anyways its good to see the characters growing up some more, i can remember when noah came out al of us were like he's finally growing up, but apparently there's alot more of growing up

the reason that noah explained so much about the job is bcuz wen yer a kid & yer excited 2 get a job, its a good feeling & yer kinda obsessed w/ telling every1 bout it. hes excited bout it.

new chapter up. hope y'all like

Damn Kell, I am now convinced that you are definitely a good writer.

I agree. It was pointed and well written.

wow, thanks kabes, that was rly nice of u.

wada bout other things? like wad u think of it?

Wow Kell.. This chapter was really good. It hits at something that really troubles people. People can be really cruel in stories. But I find that in real life, people can be a hell of a lot worse. The kind of stuff that West said actually get said. Like those people that protested the trial of the Matthew Shepherd killers. You touched on that kind of mentality here and it is seriously disturbing.
When I was imagining all the different ways I things might go when I came out to my mom, I planned on making sure she wouldn't drive for a while in every scenario, just to make sure she'd be safe.
It doesn't make any sense at all! People attach so much to things that are outside of their control... but it still matters way too much to them. You cannot predict car crashes and shit like that.