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Admin Posts : 3509 Join date : 2008-10-05

tribute to lost friends.....hmm

not brill, lol. i agree. i think the plot of it was decent anuf, but i think if it had bin a bit longer, i cuda gone deeper & made it better

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon Apr 27, 2009 6:27 pm

Relax Kell, the chapter was really well written, it was nice to get some more background information on Connor and who he is as a person, not just the sex and stuff.

Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 34

yes kell, when i said it was ok, i didnt mean that it was terrible, lol. the plot WAS pretty good. because the fact that he was making old friends new is something that we dont see very often do we now??? for me it just thefact that it wasnt deep enough like you said made it... ok-ish

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new chapter. hope y'all like it

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon May 11, 2009 10:57 pm

Hmmm, you keep talking about colleges and LGBT pride parades Kell, its become a theme for the last couple chapters.
Really nicely written as always

Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 34

why didnt noah go??? anyways when it came to the part where TAC realise that it was a parade i was kinda hoping that they will meet NAJ drunken

i guess the person who wanted your characters to meet is pretty lucky that he got his wish, lol. anyways since when were TAC going to leave high school??? coz as far as i remember they were just thinking about going to the same school and not the 'going' part of it... idk. anyways it was interesting but kinda pointless, the story didnt progress in anyway, other than that it was just funny in a weird way, that's all...

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it progressed very very slightly. i think most closet cases dont rly attend random rallies also, so maybe hes getting a lil bit closer day by day 2 bieng more open bout it maybe?

they didnt leave high skool, wada u talking about?

Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 34

I guess I just assumed that they finished school. The story progressed very little. Anyways, do you both of them will have a chance going to the same uni?

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theyre sophmores in high skool. apparently travis likes 2 look at colleges early. lol

its possible theyll go 2 the same skool, but realistically, its unlikely

Posts : 1471 Join date : 2008-10-19

Heck, there is nothing wrong with sophmores looking & visiting colleges early. I am hoping that my sophmore, almost junior friend would like to visit a college or university early soon too (hint, hint) Very Happy

. But ya, I understand it & definitely enjoy it, lol.

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aww shit, sry guys. i was rly writing & planning out a new chapter 2nite, but i got sidetracked by sum stuff & now its gone. i apologize. realistically, i probly wont egt up a new chapter at all this week. sry kabes

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k, its finally up, chapter 12. discuss.....................................................................................................................here

Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 34

Wow, connor was being mean...

when i started reading i was like, kell why the hell didnt you put the sex scene? But later another scene came up, oh well. Anyways i really dont see why should travis should come out to his old friends. And like i said, connor was being totally mean, even though travis doesnt know about. I feel like theres something bad thats gonna happen in this trip...

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connor WAS being a lil bit of an asshole. i mean, yer being offered 2 go 2 another part of the country almost free (being paid 4 by sum1 else) & yer complaining? i mean wtf?

well, travis seems rly comfortable w/ his sexuality, so he probly wants 2 tie up loose eneds w/ ppl from b4 he moved

Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 34

I didnt think about the travelling for free part but yeah, its pretty stupid of him... I was thinking about why he might be so reluctant. Maybe he has a serious superiority complex and pretty much hates farm kids except for travis... And overall the sex saved the chapter from being boring, lol.

and what happened to chris?? Havent heard about him in quite some time...

Posts : 676 Join date : 2008-11-13 Age : 33

Travis's old friends are an unknown to connor, they might not like him or they might hate him for turning travis gay as they see it. Also, in travis's case he knows all these people, he's with his family, if something goes wrong he can deal with it. Connor would know nobody there but travis and his parents, and if things get rough for him he can't just make them take him home, he has to stick it out for the rest of their holiday. Personally I can see where he's coming from. Going on holiday with other people is a tricky business :-/

Posts : 676 Join date : 2008-11-13 Age : 33

Travis's old friends are an unknown to connor, they might not like him or they might hate him for turning travis gay as they see it. Also, in travis's case he knows all these people, he's with his family, if something goes wrong he can deal with it. Connor would know nobody there but travis and his parents, and if things get rough for him he can't just make them take him home, he has to stick it out for the rest of their holiday. Personally I can see where he's coming from. Going on holiday with other people is a tricky business :-/

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Jun 10, 2009 5:53 am

Sabazius wrote:: Travis's old friends are an unknown to connor, they might not like him or they might hate him for turning travis gay as they see it. Also, in travis's case he knows all these people, he's with his family, if something goes wrong he can deal with it. Connor would know nobody there but travis and his parents, and if things get rough for him he can't just make them take him home, he has to stick it out for the rest of their holiday. Personally I can see where he's coming from. Going on holiday with other people is a tricky business :-/

Very much agreed

Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 34

Hmm... It explains why he might be relutant to go but not why he was so mean about...

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Sabazius wrote:: Going on holiday with other people is a tricky business :-/

naj

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new tac finally. its from travis' pov, so i hope u guys like it. if ya do, i might do it more often

Posts : 2553 Join date : 2008-11-07 Age : 34

well i did. it was a little different from your usual writing style... but idk. i hope henry is straight outs TAC. but the beginning of the chapter doesnt suggest anything like that, so there goes my thought. as for the story itself, its cool that you are not going too deep into the past...

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I am curious about the henry character, he could be not mentioned again but why not have him join the story. Perhaps he could have spied on them making love, or they could talk to him again and find out he is gay. Perhaps he could have a boyfriend himself.

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Aug 26, 2009 3:35 pm

As E said, this was different from your usual writing style. I thought it was pretty cool to bring the characters back to where it all began for Travis, and sharing that with Connor.

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well its not over yet. as they sed. they weree there 4 a whole week. so therell be more chapters of them there

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