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alex, all yer reviews always make me happy

dare de-vil wrote:

alex, all yer reviews always make me happy

Well, it's the least I can do to pay you back for how happy your stories make me

happy, or 'happy'?

Must you sully an exchange of innocent praises with your FILTHY SMUT?

always

LOOOOOL!!!


i wish i was british. then id have really cool vocab words to use. actually i dont wanna be british anymore. stay on topic

dare de-vil wrote:

LOOOOOL!!!


i wish i was british. then id have really cool vocab words to use. actually i dont wanna be british anymore. stay on topic

My vocabulary isn't a british thing, it's a 'reading lots of books and liking words and being an english student' thing.

so u admit ur british then?

dare de-vil wrote:

so u admit ur british then?

Well... yeah.

Love the new chapter! It was short though! I wanted more, like juicy more x]
But overall it was great[:

thank u lanny. sorry u didnt get more, but oh well lol

How did i miss a new chapter? oh well, just read it. now all of alex's comments makes sense lol. i am really curious as to how connor's dad reacts when he can't push his son away like his brother. good job kell!

huh?

well its about time tac was introduced to 2011. sorry guys, really. ill take ur discussion as forgiveness

Damn.. made me tear up. the fleet-wood mac line was priceless!

That was sweat what Connor did for Travis.

loooooved it

That's probably the cutest chapter that you've ever written, yet. It was really sweet and sappy and romantic and such a difference from what someone like Rory would do. I really liked it and I really like how diverse your characters are. Well done Kellen! Very well done!

greatest ephraim shadrach review ever

So much fluff. Oh my god, the fluff...

Kell. You make your characters say and do the sweetest things sometimes, and it comes off as completely believable not just because that's how you built the characters, but I think also because you make the readers *want* them to be that way. You have a talent for making people identify with your characters and want them to succeed and overcome whatever obstacles you put in their lives. And in this case, it helps us believe in the love you created between Travis and Connor.

This speaks to you as a person as well. I'll refrain from saying too much, lest we need to blow our noses with pancakes to get the sap off. But I just want to say that the poem had to come from somewhere. Even if the last part was Fleetwood Mac, you wrote the rest of it, and if you can write that for a fictional character, then it speaks wonders to the creative spirit inside you, and what's more, it speaks to how much love you're capable of giving to another person. I've said this to you before, but one day you will make someone feel like the most important, beautiful, special person in the world.

Brilliantly done Kellen, don't change who you are, don't change how you write. Bravo.

if by "said this before" u mean 3 minutes ago in our facebook chat, then yes, i seem to recall that xD

best trevor ritchie review ever

thank u

Perhaps I should keep saying it, at least until you believe it yourself. Take time one of these days to read your very first chapters, and see how you've evolved as a writer, see how much has changed as you've changed as a person.

one day im not gonna being reading those first chapters as they are now...... *trails off mysteriously*

Fluff<3

painservedcold wrote:

So much fluff. Oh my god, the fluff...

Kell. You make your characters say and do the sweetest things sometimes, and it comes off as completely believable not just because that's how you built the characters, but I think also because you make the readers *want* them to be that way. You have a talent for making people identify with your characters and want them to succeed and overcome whatever obstacles you put in their lives. And in this case, it helps us believe in the love you created between Travis and Connor.

This speaks to you as a person as well. I'll refrain from saying too much, lest we need to blow our noses with pancakes to get the sap off. But I just want to say that the poem had to come from somewhere. Even if the last part was Fleetwood Mac, you wrote the rest of it, and if you can write that for a fictional character, then it speaks wonders to the creative spirit inside you, and what's more, it speaks to how much love you're capable of giving to another person. I've said this to you before, but one day you will make someone feel like the most important, beautiful, special person in the world.

Brilliantly done Kellen, don't change who you are, don't change how you write. Bravo.

THIS. ABSOLUTELY THIS.
Also I loved the Fleetwood Mac