Story Discussion

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:19 am

OR maybe im just a horn dog and like when Kell types up sexual things HAHAHA

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ROFL dude that was quite...elaborate lol. I'm not gonna lie I did consider if Rory and the colonel should become involved. And I decided a while ago on what I chose

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:13 am

And what ever you chose i will read in total happiness

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i tried to "like" that last post of your der lol.

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lo & behold, a new chapter. it is lo & behold, right? its not like low, loe or somethin'..w/e

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rory has a crush on caleb. he should. somehow he sounds a little better than trent, but thats just me. anyway, it was a nice chapter i guess. idk what a fun house is, is it like the house of mirrors or whatever coz there was this thing about reflections and stuff. oh and kell, liking the water rides and going on it over and over again sounded all too familiar.

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:34 am

Yeah kell, it's 'lo'.
I really liked this chapter, it showed off the fact that Rory has a more mature sense of fairness (perhaps because of his disillusioning upbringing) than his friends and his boyfriend. I think that's something that could come between him and Trent, but I don't think Rory really has a crush on Caleb, or that they would work particularly well together. But I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, this story has a lot of complex strands to it Smile

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thank u alex. and e

i put the water ride part in because it reminded me of when i went to six flags & i went on a water ride 5 times Very Happy

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:04 pm

fuck ya great chapter kell Exclamation

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rory is soooo going 2 fall 4 caleb

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u think so huh? well i guess ull just hafta keep readin'

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dont worry, i will Wink

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:31 am

i think either A: rory is jealous of calebs life, or B: is going to hurt caleb to show his masculinity that he lost in others peoples eyes. and from the point when the colonel first came in i figured rory would move in with him

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maybe 1 of those is right. maybe not. lol

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k so the newest chapter is up & yes i know its a bit sloppy & its very bland, but im havin sum trouble with this story so far. however the next chapter, id like to thank ephraim for giving me the idea

so lemme hear wat u peeps think

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nothing with sex can be bland...

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ugh. the sex was bland lol

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well if u WANT me to say it was bad...

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i WANT u to be honest lol

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i know and im telling you the sex was fine!

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Andy1218 wrote:: .
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i know and im telling you the sex was fine!

sure i think sex is not fine

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umm... nirvana, why do you keep adding links in ur posts?

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Perhaps they're accidental

Subject: Re: Story Discussion Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:44 am

dare de-vil wrote:: Perhaps they're accidental

How do you accidentally add concealed links? To a quote from someone else's post?

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spammer in out midst?

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